by SylverLyf
Good story, I loved the ending, but my goodness you mis-spelled a lot of words! It was rather distracting.
I Loved Your Story - And I Found The Ending To be A Wonderful Surprise.
Please Give Us More Of Your Writing - - -
Nurse Kris
Not a bad little story but I think you could have done with a good editor. There are a lot of spelling errors and what could be typos, and you had a tendency to change tenses within the tale. However, it was enjoyable enough and I've given you four stars---it would have been five but for the errors.