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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Very Charitable

Damned fine story that, Lynn.

HP

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Love this story Lynn!!! Beau

DesertPirateDesertPirateover 11 years ago
A treat!

This is a perfect Christmas story! Well done Lynn!

chytownchytownover 11 years ago
Very Warm Story****

Thanks for sharing good read!!

kimbaleekimbaleeover 11 years ago
smiling

Well, there you go, inspiring me to go out and be a do-gooder. ;) Great story, Lynn.

jiminabjiminabover 11 years ago
WOW

Very, very good Lynn. I also tear up thinking of my Mom who passed 47 years ago. Some things you never forget. Thank you. Jim

NekoParksNekoParksover 11 years ago
Just an outstanding Christmas story in every way...

I finished your story with tears in my eyes. You are a talented writer. Thank you for writing and sharing such a beautifully crafted and compassionate story. As I read your story, I was reminded of an exchange between two characters from one of my favorite films, Coppola’s THE CONVERSATION:

[Ann sees a homeless man on a park bench]

Ann: Every time I see one of those old guys, I always think the same thing.

Mark: What do you think?

Ann: I always think that he was once somebody's baby boy. Really, I do. I think he was once somebody's baby boy and he had a mother and a father who loved him, and now there he is, half dead on a park bench, and where are his mother or his father, all his uncles now?

I will definitely be reading your other stories. I love discovering new authors.

Merry Christmas!

loganforesterloganforesterover 11 years ago
Nice story

A nice tale about the true meaning of the holidays. Good Job Lynn.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice Reminder

A nice reminder of the way things be. And I can understand - almost homeless once my self but a friend took me in until I could get back to taking care of myself. An unpleasant experience but made better through friendship.

Nice story well writte,

Rugrat60

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Mom

Happy Easter mum ...Where ever you are

NKKMDNKKMDover 8 years ago
Hair raising

And I mean in the best possible way...and literally.

Your story DID give me goose bumps.

Good job. God bless.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Happy Easter

to Natsha,,Nicola & Verity,,my 3 wonderful girls I lost 20 years ago

through my own fault

Dad JR

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623over 7 years ago
To my daughter Elizabeth

who was taken by lies . . . I love you. Merry Christmas baby to you & Gabriel.

rightbankrightbankabout 7 years ago
thank you _Lynn_

Beautiful

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
finish the story.

The story is good but should have more than one chapter. Did she find the group and her mother?

eljj546eljj546almost 2 years ago
Thank you for this story

I belong to a church group and we go out on Sundays and feed the homeless. We are trying to make a difference

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Author of stories that touch the reader with emotion and a hint of reality.