one who wishes to cum in, TK U MLJ LV NV
about 1/3 of the way down
Interesting concept, and a brave move to associate a word like oxymoron with a woman's body. I think the last line is weak, however. There is not much of a contraction between admired and entered - how about ending it with something like:
to hear your screams, and sighs?
Good point, and with the benefit of your objective lens, I'm now feeling a little disappointed in the last two lines. Plundered and treasured roughly maintain the oxymoron conceit, and cradled / pressed is close (but could be better); admired / entered is just not at the same game.
Needs think time.
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