All Comments on 'The Lollipop'

by SpoiledRedhead

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josephstevensjosephstevensover 11 years ago
You Get Better..

I did not think your writing could improve. It has. I want to vote '6'....Very arousing...Love it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great story

You wrote this so well it was as if I was there watching it all happen. Keep it up!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
This needs to be an audio

And done soon!

Then I wouldn't lose my place in mid stroke!

GoldminingsuxGoldminingsuxalmost 10 years ago
Sweet Mercies :)

Great story, love the imagery the building tension and the reward at the end!

daweidaweialmost 10 years ago
delicious story

Thanks for the erotic gem of a story. I liked your style and everything that happened to that lollipop.

Wildcat445Wildcat445over 9 years ago
Candy!

Mmmmm...cherry. ;) Loved it!

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