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by Anonymous11/21/12

Need a editor

Like me, it is obvious that English is not your first language.

You can improve the story a lot by getting someone to read it and correct your English. I know it helps, I have to do it often.

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by Anonymous11/21/12

Seriously BAD English ....

I was VERY distracted by the wrong use of words - it needs SERIOUS proof reading!

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by Anonymous11/22/12

Good!

I thought it was very entertaining. I'm not a grammar nazi so I can see through the misspellings. :)

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by Anonymous07/12/14

Hmm

Voluntary Cuckold or swinger? Penis cage soon ?

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