Although this theme is not one of my favorites I'm compelled to give the story a top rating for the good writing and for the exceptionally good illustrations.
I agree with William 100%. Not one of my favorite themes or plot arcs, but extremely well written and illustrated. It's a 5 for sure.
Run this by your copy editor again.
Decent theme and work but the typos and grammatical failings are distracting enough to make the story unreadable.
Well written asnd interesting look at very early traditions and fears.
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