All Comments on 'Silver Angels'

by qhml1

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Amazing!

You are an amazing writer. Ty for sharing such a wonderful story for the holidays. Looking forward to seeing more from you in the coming year. Happy holidays :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Thank You!

This is a wonderful story, thank you for sharing it with us! Have a blessed holiday.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Fantastic

I'd give it 10 stars if I could.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Boring

This was so slow moving and pointless that I could only manage to skim the second half. Whatever. I'll give it a "2", since it was fairly well written in a technical sense.

BigJohn601BigJohn601over 11 years ago
A very uplifting and well written story...

Thanks for this story and the many others you have gifted to all of us.

YgraineYgraineover 11 years ago
Beautiful story

Thank you for sharing it with us.

JonATaylorJonATaylorover 11 years ago
Five Stars

Schmaltzy seasonal story, but that's perfectly alright when it's done right. Two years in Nam. We couldn't piggyback unless we re-upped. Not bloody likely.

chytownchytownover 11 years ago
Five Stars*****

Great story thanks for sharing.

DragonsbaineDragonsbaineover 11 years ago
Thank you

Thank you for a great christmas story

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 11 years ago
Agh ! Darn it .

This was cheesy, but five silver stars cheesy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Sometimes .....

The greatest kindness we do for each other is anonymous and selfless. Thank you for your story. RIP Jay, Nancy, Joseph, and Andrew. Been one helluva year!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Tears all over my keyboard.

5 stars, thanks for writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Well Done

A very nice story easily followed with a wonderful ending.

Deeply_TwistedDeeply_Twistedover 11 years ago
Just wonderful...

A touching, gentle, loving story that is full of grace and charm. Darn you for making me feel emotions!

njlaurennjlaurenover 11 years ago
beautiful

you made me cry ,just absolutely touching.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Beyond wonderful.

This sweet story, so filled with wonder, is a timely reminder of how we receive by giving. Thank you so much.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
thank you

as I read this story tears come to my eyes. I am getting on in age and see the end is near. my tears come not for me but for my wife and kids. I will no longer be there for them. they will mourn my passing. I can see my wife's grief stricken face. worse than the one that I saw when her dad and later her mom died, hopefully God will allow me to be their silver angel. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
anonymous

nicely done...

TavadelphinTavadelphinabout 10 years ago
A wonderful holiday journey

With a great message and good people - even Edwina made her peace and work through her anger and hatred - nice stuff.

bruce22bruce22almost 10 years ago
Beautiful Story

It sounds so well thought out and written. Take care!

dylan954dylan954almost 10 years ago
Wondrous Story

Thank you for a really good read. Loved the characters and the plot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Thank you

I read this 12/24/2014. It reminds me of the meaning of Christmas. Doing good for others when they need it, not sling our egos around.

sbrooks103sbrooks103over 8 years ago
Not A Believer, But...

I',m not a believer of any kind, but this story still moved me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Again you showcase with a story like this. you are not a great story teller but a modern bard.

Ed Grocott

edgrocott@gmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Very sweet

thank you for an uplifting tale ... Scotty

rightbankrightbankover 8 years ago
too far

too much

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
The story...

is one of the best. Thank you.

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623over 7 years ago
Simply wonderful

Thank you for a wonderful winter story. Please keep writing!!

TalonsreachTalonsreachover 6 years ago
Thanks

I always appreciate a story that lifts spirits (no pun intended).

Owen4230Owen4230over 6 years ago
Quality

I think most people would agree that your stories, short or long are quality. Nice one. Keep writing. Thank you for the pleasure of reading your work. Owen

etchiboyetchiboyabout 6 years ago
And there I go again, my eyes all misty...

... after another one of qhml1’s stories.

Sort of more poignant than usual as I’m back in my family’s home (the one I grew up in), cleaning up after putting my father in a nursing home a couple of weeks ago. This seems to hit a little closer to home. Though, don’t most of qhml1’s stories do so? 😭

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Reminds me of an episode

of Mash where Hawkeye turns the clock ahead a few minutes so a family won't think of their soldier dying on Christmas day.

BZ

Cal59Cal59about 5 years ago
Thanks!

Xmas Eve 2018, just found your story, excellent thankyou

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Sounds familier

The brother I was closest to was 12 years older than me, his birthday was Dec. 20th. He died 7 years ago, he would be 76 if he had lived longer. Spent time with him the 5 months he was in the hospital before he died, telling stories of growing up. We seem to have a tradition in our family, no one dies alone, his daughter was with him when he passed. Thanks for this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Decent

Decent story,far better than the majority of crap published on Literotica

Mojo648Mojo648almost 4 years ago
Review

I liked it ,

Until towards the end telling the story, I lost the plot, sorry.

MarkT63MarkT63over 3 years ago
Inspiring story.

Nice sad Christmas story...

Cals_KidCals_Kidover 3 years ago
Doggone you!

You made an old man cry (again). Lovely story and one that reaches where most others don't.

dgfergiedgfergieabout 3 years ago
as usual

a very nice emotional story and almost tears in this old guys eyes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

One more special gift to those who enjoy reading. Thank you for another Christmas tradition.

somewhere east of Omaha

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
corny...?

corny.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

mostly filler...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
WOW!!!

For me....a real tear jerker! Thanks!!!

Omart57Omart57almost 3 years ago

Made my eyes leak , dude! Great story!

Antryg_WindroseAntryg_Windrosealmost 3 years ago

Fine tearjerker with the usual qhml1 sloppiness - typing too fast, not reviewing and fixing misspellings, missing words, misplaced punctuation, confused pronouns and POVs, etc. Seriously, all your stories need disciplined editing.

Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

Made me weep, I'm 67 years old for Christ's sake. beautiful story. AAAAA+++++

housedadhousedadover 2 years ago

With all the chaos and anger in this world, it is good to see and even hear there is still good in some of us. A very touching story. Well done.

GuyfromShadesGuyfromShadesabout 2 years ago

Even fiction, it is a heartfelt story. Thanks for writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Thank you! That was beautiful!!

Jim

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The best tear jerker I have ever read from any writer, ever. Enough to keep tissue manufacturer in business. Even if most of it is fiction, it includes enough reality to lead us to believe it is real. Thx.

5* +++++

BJ

StubbyoneStubbyoneover 1 year ago

What the heck ? Cried like a baby. No fair ! 5-😊😂😊😂😊

Cito22Cito22over 1 year ago

I'm crying like a 5 yr old, but this gets 100 Stars in my book.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbiman12 months ago

5 Stars or more very touching.

linnearlinnear11 months ago

I was reading through the tears at the end. A very powerful tale, bravo.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Very special story. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Oh Lordy I’m making tear puddles on my Moon Pie….

Nuff said, Still 10 on the five scale.

On to da next…

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

In a world of strife you can, even today, find angels.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Powerful emotive story about love and loss. Thank you for sharing it with us. And making me use another pack of tissues 🤧 😢 BardnotBard

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Sweet

GardenshedGardenshed6 months ago

All I have to say WOW! That was a crazy emotional story. I got sucked right into the story…..

Thanks for writing.

10x 5⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Good story.

Ocker53Ocker53about 2 months ago

Another great story, from a great story teller⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Hallmark should put you on retainer Q. A great holiday tale! 5 stars

somewhere east of Omaha

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