The Ebony Alpha Ch. 03

love it

love were its going but need longer chapters please....

Great

I love the story so far but can you make chapters a little longer ?

Great start

But my comment is the same, you need to make the chapters longer. Just as I get into a groove and relax for the reading I'm at the end.

Well done!!!

The chapter is a little short but I am loving the story. Keep up the good work.

I loved your story please keep writing

Thank you for the good read.

For a new writer I think your doing great, longer will come. :-)

Working on it

I am working to make the chapters longer. It is a learning process. But I am a quick study. Thanks for the comments!

can't wait

can't wait for more

good work

i love the begin. can't wait for the next chapter.

More please!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Love the story so far. The short chapters are frustrating. I appreciate the chapters being posted fast though. I would give up if I had to wait weeks for short chapters. The story is very engaging and I will keep tuning in. I think this is the first time I am reading about an ebony alpha and I love it!

GOOD STORY,SHORT CHAPTERS SUCK...

Good story,but just moving too fast,,,,or make longer chapters,,,something more than a 5 minute read,keep up the good work.

Scent masking questions . . .

I'm a little late, but was thinking that after consuming the potion wouldn't she need to shower her current scent off? Or at least change to new clothes that didn't have her scent on them? (Raphael began by sniffing Megan's jacket that was lying on the couch. He recognized her sweet orchid and vanilla smell.) Just wondering . .

Just a guess

They spent hours planning. I'm guessing she had showered and had clothes that were cleaned with products different than what she usually used.

I love this whole series. You my dear are a wonderful story teller. Please do another

I would be glad to patronize your work. Are you a professional writer? I would love to see this as a mainstream movie great story