All Comments on 'Three Magi'

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brian358brian358over 11 years ago
Haha!

Very nice short story!

Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Just in time for the holidays!

Loved how you reworked your story, "Three Sisters", by making the girls' breasts even larger: Quadruple M! Awesome!

Happy to see this story posted; and can't wait to see what you post next.

Adrian Burns

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
A SHAGGY DOG STORY

disguised as lit. hope and promise. TK U MLJ LV NV

brian358brian358over 11 years ago
Good Grief!

I'd forgotten about Three Sisters!

Great story - in either version! :-)

DDDDaveDDDDaveover 11 years agoAuthor
I couldn't find Three Sisters!

I rewrote this because I couldn't find the original! Not on my hard drive and I'd forgotten what title I gave it. So.... Since I'm trying to repost everything here I decided to redo it. I know it's not exact but maybe it's a close match. And the idea is one that continues to float in the back of my mind.

I didn't post it in Humour because I didn't want to give away the ending. Oh, and I have NO IDEA if this guy's got a brother! I've never thought about it past the "punch line". Such as it is.

Tw0Cr0wsTw0Cr0wsabout 10 years ago
older siblings, younger siblings

I had never heard of younger siblings being more attractive, but I have heard that older siblings are more intelligent.

kazilla122kazilla122over 9 years ago
Bra Sizes Do Not Exist Without Back Sizes

Please, please don't take this to mean that I don't like your stories. I DO! however as the cup size is a relative measurement(not all D's are the same volume) it is hard to know just how big you actually mean. see fullerfigurefullerbust.com/2012/08/16/bra-sizes-do-not-exist-without-back-sizes/ Also while not in this story you have in most of your others included an outdated measuring method of adding inches (5!?!) to the characters bustline for their size, while this kind of worked in the fifties and sixties, it does not now. ie: fullerfigurefullerbust's Simply Proven Wrong post. You get major credit for thinking of larger sizes, higher letters than just DD's,(see fullerfigurefullerbust's the alphabet does not stop at DDD) but you seem to give the girls some giant ribcages(underbust). Now both of these could be in an effort to visualize larger breasts! but just seems unrealistic to me. see sophiajenner.wordpress.com/2012/02/20are-celebrities-bad-bra-role-models/ or

fullerfigurefullerbust's celebrity bra sizes.

WOW!! Sorry to unload on you like that but as a big boob fan, I was tired of too many authors just purporting wrong and false ideas. Like I said I love your stories.

PS all boobs need bras or else they end up saggy :(

EIoPolizeiEIoPolizeialmost 4 years ago

That's it? Where is the rest?

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