You lost me in the first paragraph. I can't read it after you misused "residents" for "residence." Please find an editor!
i am afraid my editor i am using was unavailable to edit this story. i used an online grammar program for this story only. All my other stories are edited by the same person. i am so sorry.
Even with the few mistakes this is a very nice story. Please keep them coming.
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You lost me in the first paragraph. I can't read it after you misused "residents" for "residence." Please find an editor!
sorry
i am afraid my editor i am using was unavailable to edit this story. i used an online grammar program for this story only. All my other stories are edited by the same person. i am so sorry.
Very Nice
Even with the few mistakes this is a very nice story. Please keep them coming.
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