All Comments on 'Muscle and Music Ch. 01'

Nice start! Can't wait to read next

Nice beginning")

Like the flow in the story. And the fact that "Mr. Construction" simply choose to give it to his new neighbour waring no more than a pair of boxers is just plain fun;)

A longer chapter wouldn`t hurt.

Keep it up and post soon...

more!

Very promising start. I look forward to reading more.

Wow what a beginning lol am so going to enjoy reading this story hurry with chapter 2 please..... :):)

it's 3 am and he has to get up at 6. then the next paragraph he wakes at 5 as usual?

More, soon!

Go on, go on, just can't wait to see what happens to this lucky dude !

Oka-ay, fairly promising so far, except: it's cruel to feed pizza to a dog - buy some good quality dogfood, hero!, and a romantic interest who's so inconsiderate as to play music late at night? Not a nice person. Hope you can turn that around.

great start love that music guy is so badass he just seems amused while eating the other guy with his eyes lol very nice start

I'm ready for Ch. 02 and 03 and 04 and ... and ....

I can't wait for the next chapters I hope music lover gets it, in more ways then one. Working nights I know where the pissed off guy is coming from keep up the good work,