All Comments on 'Interruption'

Not too bad as an opening - but we'll have to see where it goes.

you might find a stranger with a hatchet or camera. TK U MLJ LV NV

what will happen next? I think stranger is not stranger

First, please put Ch.1 on the beginning part of a series (and keep all chapters of the series in the SAME LIT category!)

This is the MOST obvious series start of all time! Reminds me of Saturday matinee serials at theaters 'in the day!' End each serial with an impending disaster! Who shot JR?

Agree, too soon to rate. Too late to lock and latch the bedroom door!

I rated it 1*.

What a screwed little shit is this?! A husband fucks his wife and stranger enters with a knife. End of the story! Fuck yourself, Blue!