Sorry, I didn't buy into this story from paragraph one. Disjointed, not even slightly believable. I gave you two stars because you can at least spell. Sorry, keep trying.
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Sorry, I didn't buy into this story from paragraph one. Disjointed, not even slightly believable. I gave you two stars because you can at least spell. Sorry, keep trying.
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