All Comments on 'Am I Dreaming? Ch. 01'

Do you think my writing is good enough for another or do you think I should quit?

Try it. Just a tip though, your dialog needs a bit of work. When somebody says something, make sure not to include the 'he said' or 'he thought' in the quotations. Also, there were a few typos, so try fixing them up through a simple revision. Otherwise, it was fine. Right more :)

Don't worry about the errors that were pointed out. Most writers hadta try n try again to perfect their writing. If you do eventually decide to go ahead with the story, you can get yourself an editor. Good start though. :)

Dharmie.

You should totally keep writing! No matter what people say keep going! Your story is pretty good, i like it!

i was excited for chapter 2 by the end of this and cant find it so i'm guessing theres not a chapter 2 verry disapointing

I am thinking about revisiting this and making chapter 2. I will start writing it, however if I feel it doesn't work well with what I wrote prev. I won't release it.