All Comments on 'A Sub's Christmas Present'

by AndrewJackson

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jusdafaxjusdafaxover 11 years ago
Great story until the last line.

Your last sentence destroyed the entire feel of the story, turning the Domme from a caring mistress into a person bent on ruining her sub's life.

patricia4332003patricia4332003over 11 years ago
arousing story

I felt as though I were there enjoying the scene. Very intense and enjoyable, thank you so much. xoox p

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