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A Sub's Christmas Present

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by Anonymous

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by jusdafax11/22/12

Great story until the last line.

Your last sentence destroyed the entire feel of the story, turning the Domme from a caring mistress into a person bent on ruining her sub's life.

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by patricia433200311/23/12

arousing story

I felt as though I were there enjoying the scene. Very intense and enjoyable, thank you so much. xoox p

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