All Comments on 'A Flaming Pile of Christmas'

Brilliant! You should write for a living. Or maybe you do and erotica is just a hobby. Either way, well done.

Oh, one minor comment. Watch for homophones in the editing process. Your for you're, for example. Small ripples in an otherwise smooth stream.

Genuinely had tears of laughter from reading this. I could imagine bill murray or jack nicholson playing this role in a film

loved it, more please

A damn good, old fashioned romp.....

Just LOVE your stories - P L E A S E keep on writing...........

P.S.

Watch out for any split infinitives........:-)

I laughed out loud in a few places. This was great!

I'd give it three, but I've still got my pants on.

A very well-told story of an ordinary bloke. I was chuckling in several places with your use of image.

DO NOT STOP WRITING please.

HP

The story was excellent, but when they finally hit the sack I was let down, I guess I enjoy a little more detail with the sex scenes.. otherwise great story!

What a contrast and funny. Well written and funny. Did I mention that? Entertaining all the way to the end. Only one question - What happened to the brother?

Rugrat60

Thank you. I have no idea what happened after they left him in the hospital. They're snowed in and too busy to care at the moment. I'm sure she'll send a text to him when he gets out of the hospital. Hopefully they have enough peanut butter to last until spring.

Thanks for the input and enjoying my demented mind.

I really enjoy the sarcasm and sharp wit in your stories. Thank you for recommending this one to me. Another new favorite.

You are becoming my favorite author on this site. It's nice to read grown up stories for grown ups.

Wonderful!

I'm also kind of curious if his brother is such a shit why he was there to begin with...

But decent story...

That was the first time I have laughed while reading an erotica story. Nicely done.

Absolutely great story, crackling with tension and sexuality.