A Flaming Pile of Christmas

Brilliant! You should write for a living. Or maybe you do and erotica is just a hobby. Either way, well done.

Oh, one minor comment. Watch for homophones in the editing process. Your for you're, for example. Small ripples in an otherwise smooth stream.

loved it!

Genuinely had tears of laughter from reading this. I could imagine bill murray or jack nicholson playing this role in a film

loved it, more please

Hilarious !!

A damn good, old fashioned romp.....

Just LOVE your stories - P L E A S E keep on writing...........

P.S.

Watch out for any split infinitives........:-)

lol

I laughed out loud in a few places. This was great!

Two thumbs up.

I'd give it three, but I've still got my pants on.

Damned good

A very well-told story of an ordinary bloke. I was chuckling in several places with your use of image.
DO NOT STOP WRITING please.
HP

great

The story was excellent, but when they finally hit the sack I was let down, I guess I enjoy a little more detail with the sex scenes.. otherwise great story!

Funny And Good

What a contrast and funny. Well written and funny. Did I mention that? Entertaining all the way to the end. Only one question - What happened to the brother?
Rugrat60

In response to Funny and Good

Thank you. I have no idea what happened after they left him in the hospital. They're snowed in and too busy to care at the moment. I'm sure she'll send a text to him when he gets out of the hospital. Hopefully they have enough peanut butter to last until spring.

Thanks for the input and enjoying my demented mind.

Wickedly Funny

I really enjoy the sarcasm and sharp wit in your stories. Thank you for recommending this one to me. Another new favorite.

WITTY!!

You are becoming my favorite author on this site. It's nice to read grown up stories for grown ups.

Loved it!!

Wonderful!