All Comments on 'Falling Hard'

That was a interesting read, I was really sad you wrote Kiki got killed in that freak accident but oh well enjoyable to read non the less, look forward to reading more from you.

I got tears in my eyes, both of sorrow and joys.Thanx.

Your writing is crisp and funny. It moves fast and pulls the reader along. A fine skill. There was a Shalesperian tragedy essence building, so Kiki's demise was almost expected. Finding the baby revealed the impossible irony of the story. Great stuff. please keep posting to this site. When you feel like a challenge, try a Loving Wives story. This category attracts the best and the worst of writers. Infidelity creates conflict and deep feelings, and offers wide possibilities for story lines. Just be prepared for neandrethal comments if you choose to reconcile the marriage.

the transition was light, but it poked to the depth of the heart. very well done. keep on writing.

If I want reality I'll watch the news on Tv.

And a delight to read. Thank you.

Bravo! Nicely done.

A few grammatical & spelling errors distracted me, but that is my problem.

Before criticizing, I'd like to say that this story had far more heart than most on this website. It's beautiful and powerful and did touch me.

Now for the technical details. I found that some things were not clear, and sort of weakened my understanding of the main character. I felt that there should have been a bit more detail on his life/family/situation, perhaps, as well as her job maybe? That's the main criticism I would have, a far second one being that a few sentences were a bit cheesy or overdramatic.

The most impressive bit is that the relationship felt real, or at least more so than in a lot of stories. I really got that implicit understanding of the two characters, and it all made sense. A great effort, I look forward to more writing from EPC.

I liked the couple's relationship, but the ending,while touching, was too harsh.

Wow...what a full circle of emotions! I was so mad when Kiki died and was all set to walk away annoyed with the entire story, but the way you ended it was unexpected and brilliant!

Killing off Kiki was deplorable. The story was a mind fuck plain and simple.

You Kiki-murdering Fuck.

i loved finding the baby but why take out kike

Wow Tragic story!

and I bawled. I wish you'd be more active. You have a gift.

you still have to rise up and shine if possible. TK U MLJ LV NV

brilliant! Thoroughly enjoyed it. It was funny , warm, romantic and tragic and not too slow not too fast.

Totally caught up in this story and had many emotions pulled at me. Great work.5

My friend you have pierced my heart with this tale. The double or triple dip of long, long statistical happenings elevated, stunned, and resurrected my heart.

Incrrrredible writing.

Thanks.

Great story sir. Every month or so I read a story on literotica that should be read by everyone. I believe that everything we eat, read ,drink,smell, taste changes us in some way. I definitely absorbed this story