by Harlock606
a great story. Very cleverly done. One complaint though - TOO SHORT. Thank you.
Love this intresting take on santa. Could use another chapter once the contest is done though. You left the servents, and us, hanging.
More please ... I have you saved in my favorites category, so I will know when you post another chapter or story. Boy, howdy, you can write. Thank you for sharing your story.
What a wonderful adult adaptation of the 'children's' tale!! I loved it's! Please keep writing!!