All Comments on 'Anal With My Best Friend's Girl'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
great

very good!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Yawn

Probably one of the worst stories I have ever read on here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Very well written

Great story. A little drawn out but good none the less.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
very hot

I liked the slow build up. The taboo aspect of fucking your best friends girl. Well done i hope you write about a second encounter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
HOT!!!

Almost similar to how I had anal with my friend's girl. Guilt and pleasure at the same time. Five stars.

Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
one of the best anal stories here

thanks so much...very well done! More please

Rawmaster50Rawmaster50over 11 years ago
Excellent

You covered the feelings of all the characters of this story and did it well. The conflicting feelings and the passion mean that this may not end well, but tell us more if you can about these two. Thanks 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Outstanding. You captured so many passing, subtle sensations, particularly in the first half.

ErotonautErotonautover 11 years ago
Ass to mouth?

Guess she was caught up in the moment, especially as oral remained strictly off the table when they began.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Awesome

Awesome read hope you continue it on 5 stars

TrilloTrilloover 11 years ago
Great style

Love your description, and pace.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Wow

That was quite the read, very well done. Flows like a published work.

yoniseeker1yoniseeker1over 11 years ago
delicious

smooth, powerful

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
another excellent story

I loved this one as much as the last one. I'd like to see more Bianca, please. We need to read about her losing her cherry. Though Danitza is great as well. I'd like to read more about her as well. Five stars!

Try "anal" and "virgin" for story tags...you might get more readers...

Painted_DesertPainted_Desertover 11 years ago
amazingly "real"

I loved everything about this story, from the taboo subject of best friends girl, to the dirty details of the sex, it was just perfect! Very well written!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Superb sexual writing

Believe me, you appear to have a natural talent for this. This is great work, u're on your way to becoming a literotica master writer. When time permits; please do produce more. 10 / 10

guitarist2guitarist2over 11 years ago
wow

it‘s been a while since I‘ve enjoyed a story as much as this one. you really have what it takes, so don‘t stop now.

greenhawk46greenhawk46over 10 years ago
hot like anal sex

very hot story good job

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
fucking damn!

Writers like you are what make me feel so wrong and so fucking good at the same time.

Scotsman69Scotsman69about 10 years ago
Delicate

and delicious. Fine writing. Thank you.

loveloverloveloverover 7 years ago
held together

Very consistent, clear sense of character, and .... anal passage! Go for it, folks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Damn!

Simply great!

funseeker1186funseeker1186about 6 years ago
Ya perfect!

Wow! Great anal story loved it. Don't stop writing!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Part 2?

It was a really good story i enjoyed it you should write a part 2. You can keep it going

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
amazing

I LOVED IT PART 2 PLEASE MAH DUDE

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Part 2 please!

Hot story, very well written. More chapters please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
"fertile virgin ass"

fertile ass ???

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

She may have enjoyed it I'll never know...asscracker.

You are a shitty lay ma man.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

In my book this story is a TOUR DE FORCE and a MUST READ!

I gave you a 5+ (5.5 = 110%, ☆☆☆☆☆+).

❤. 👍👍!

Danitza is a keeper! Full stop. Period!

She also gets a 5.5 (❤💚❤💚❤+)! 👍👍!

I would easily fall in love with her!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Excerpt from page 2 of the story:

Quote:

Ah, yes, my finger touched her secret opening. I felt where her skin met in a blend muscle, heat, and tender, tender skin. The instant I touched her puckered rosebud she clamped her butt cheeks closed on my finger and held me tight. Her muscled cheeks had snapped shut like a mouse trap on my intruding finger.

"Oh." She said to me in the softest voice I'd ever heard. "I've never been touched there."

End quote.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

❤💚❤💚❤ (5.0)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

💚 = ★★★★★ (5)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

One simply MUST love a girl with such a ravenous a nd insatiable anal hunger. And there simply MUST bebe at least one sequel filled with analingus and multiple "close calls" where the true lovers are nearly caught by their increasingly boring and unnecessary partners. And then a second sequel where Danitza winds up pregnant from some stray semen that hevaccidentally sprays wildly onto her cunt lipswhen Jr nuts as he's pulling out of her ass, and they end up marrying.

brfr7721brfr7721almost 2 years ago

I loved everything about this story except for the very end. WE NEED MORE!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This story has been very well received by Literotica users. It has so far got 398 favorites out of 397.6k views, which is a tad more than 1 fave (favorite) per 1k views.

5.0 = 💯% (🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟) ❤❤!

bseeker6969bseeker6969over 1 year ago

It seems that it has been a few months since someone commented so I wanted to keep the banter going. I enjoyed this story a lot. If you find a lady that is into anal, never let her go. I know that being a back door bandit is not for everyone and that's ok. Been a while for me but, not butt, not a lot of ladies even want to talk about it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I really LOVED this story, gave you a

5.0 = 100% = A+ (♡♡♡♡♡)!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Danitza is a keeper. End of story. Full stop.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Both of your characters are comples and interesting. I enjoyed his insecurities and raw lust facing off with her aloof conceit and ultimate surrender to her selfish inner devil. Nice to find such a provocative and well crafted story. Lots going on! Congrats.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

There has to be a follow up, a continuation, something!!!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Lovely premise.

Nice and slow. Not rushed. Great build up.

Didn't like the ending. Should have been at least the POSSIBILITY of continued/future ass fucking.

You need an editor/proofreader.

Five stars.

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