All Comments on 'My Wife and Her Randy Old Uncle'

Very realistic and very hot!

What you've done is a little over 800 words. ONE average literotica page is 3700+ words. You've written less than a 1/4 of a page.

It has the cachet of "I rang the doorbell, dropped my pants and fucked the first guy to answer."

No buildup, no character development nothing. There might be a story based on this plot but this isn't it. 2*