All Comments on 'Palomino Ch. 06'

I really like your story, you know how to liven up a plot line that could easily become monotonous! I have just one suggestion: The things attached to a horse's bit are reins, not reigns... I'm a horse person and it changes the meaning of things ;)

Awsome story looking forward to what happens next !

Nice story so far. Characters are sympathetic and well developed.

Btw, having a gal licking the veins of your dick is surely nice, but veins are not pumping blood into the cock, but making sure it flows back to the heart. What you mean is a artery. You cannot lick them cause they are burried deep inside for good reason.

Thanks for the Story, I am happy to go on reading.

You’re was excellent!!

Have read this a number of times and each time have been impressed with you character development. a truly well written story that doesn't need the sex.

Intense and loving.