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by demure101

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SweetOblivionSweetOblivionover 11 years ago
Another great one but one thing...

When you wrote wattled - A construction of poles intertwined with twigs, reeds, or branches, used for walls, fences, and roofs - did you mean mottled - spotted or blotched with different shades or colours?

Whatever. Let's re-read your verse to love the spring before winter kills us with it's lack of kindness.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
WHEN YOU ARE CALLING

is it vocally or mind blowing, TK U MLJ LV NV

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
5ed

i like this one, bfd

ings forgiven, but over inged a bit

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