All Comments on 'Waiting Up'

I really enjoyed reading this. Good job!

What I was thinking though, throughout the story as I was reading it, was that I would love to know how they came to be together. You give lots of pointers in the back story: She's a DA, he's a homicide cop and they'd come together for some reason; it's both their second marriage (what's going on there?) ; there's a little bit of a dom/sub 'lite' ;) action going on there...

There's so much that you could base another story, or more actually a series, on if you were up for it. I would definitely be up for reading it! So much potential there!

Keep writing, I think this is great. x

Great frist story and as anon says, potential for a story. So, chuck in your day job, drink loadsa coffee and get writing - your public awaits....!

Thank you for your very kind comments; I do plan on writing more stories surrounding Jack and Nina, once all of this holiday craziness settles down.

Absolutely amazing Luna. Such a sexy story!

Loved, loved, loved your story. Can't wait to read more.

...that you promised to write more but didn't.

Your first story was incredibly hot!