by london_james2010
Good idea for a story, but the misspelled and misused words are distracting, as are the frequent punctuation errors.
Many women want to see men together. It is easier to get guys to do than most think. Once guy has done it woman has better relationship.
I don't know what those readers were expecting. Reading from a woman's perspective is exciting. I think if my wife weren't so afraid of the ramifications of it that she would like a scene like this. She is into MM romances and talks about it often. So far it's just a fantasy.