All Comments on 'Witnessed'

well, that was positive nicely written tho

Soo good job I think tho not what I had expected

From reading several of your stories, I think you have a lot of talent! I would work on your grammar (like where to put commas), but you have wonderful ideas and a great style.

Very well written. My own personal feelings aside on the subject matter, it was well written, good imagination to come up with the whole plot, a couple of things...yeah, that's my personal feelings. On the whole. It was very well written and got your point across. Now I need to go work out my aggression by chopping down a couple of trees then wash and wax my truck so I feel better. Nearly cried man....trying to break my heart?

Sincerely, Payenbrant.

Well written, good story development in a short span and didn't see that ending coming at all. Bravo!

... that in a perfect way shows the shortcomings of all judical systems. In this case even more so - does consentual sexual intercourse justify taking a life? Never. But obviously there were times when dumb-kind thought that was just...