All Comments on 'Longing to break her off.'

This piece is too obvious, as if a Dominant's stream of consciousness is not restrained You tell too much and show too little. This makes this piece un-erotic.

Maybe, try again?

I'm going to spend some more time in the forum section, and keep learning.

I admit that story was an impulse.

Honesty and suggestions always appreciated.

Don't tell me, show me...I agree with you on that.

Thanks.

or himself to do or not to do, TK U MLJ LV NV

I liked it.