All Comments on 'Black, Lesbian, Dominant!'

by MochaLisha1

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
great start...

great start...a little slow perhaps...nothing but introducing 2 characters so far...but I'm intrigued ...I do like this theme...and hopefully Chapter 2 will pick up...

BahamaBahamaover 11 years ago
Great

That was a great opner , can't wait to see what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
black lesbian dominant

Best would be 18 year oldblack domne finds a 18 year old blonde white bitchwho is racist and introduces her4 to a life of submission serving the black race. Keep it coming

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Fantastic

Please continue this story. It is very, very good thus far.

ih2001ih2001over 11 years ago
very good story

Thank you for the story... Look forward to the next chapters

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Please continue this story.

Fascinated by the idea that tall, statuesque middle aged Emily was the mother's white bitch over many years. Oh, please need more of this.

sassytoysassytoyabout 11 years ago
interesting

very good start by the way. i liked it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Great introduction

Looking forward to the continuation.

joea1000joea1000over 10 years ago
Great Story. Please continue!

Hello Mocha Lisa,

Just wanted to let you know that I think "Black, Lesbian, Dominant" is a great story.

Very well written and a real turn on. I hope someday we get to see additional chapters. I'd love to have Alisha learn about the history between Emily and her mother. It's a delicious thought - Emily lives right across the street and probably has her own housekeeper in order to give her the time she needs to slave away for Alisha's mom. What irony! I'm also guessing that as more of the story unfolds, we will see that Emily does "come from money" and is the source of the income that provides the nice house and the cars. Emily could do anything. She chooses to toil away as the servant of her mistress. Delicious! Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Ew

What unpleasant people. Nothing about this makes me want to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Please give me more!!!

Stop teasing us!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Cannot wait to hear more

I cannot wait to hear more of this exceptional story it is very interesting and seems to draw you in to it either as a submissive like myself or a dominant made to wonder how it all began for them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Riveting story

I am already anticipating the sequel to your story.

Well written and interesting storyline.

Please continue writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
i am a post op white transsexual slave girl

i love black dominant women

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
excellent story!

Thanks so much for sharing your great writing skills in this story - hope your generousity continues with more chapters - please...

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More!

I wish I was Emily. Great story. Want more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
thats it

come on

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Write more!!!

So when is the second part coming out?

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