All Comments on 'A Revealing Experience'

What a pile of unrealistic garbage! At least it was short.

A very hot start - please continue the story

Good start, can't wait to see what comes next

Reality went out the window in this one.

Silly dialogue that didn't work, and a bad semicolon in the first paragraph to start it all off.

That was a little different for mom/son incest, but it wasn't bad. If these boobs want reality they should watch news it's full of reality. Literotica is basically jack-off stories, nothing more. Anything more read Tolstoy. Grammar is another thing they complain about, and that's a joke. Your playing with your cock or clit, the last thing your thinking about is grammar.

This story started off fairly well, but then the author rushed to the sex. As a result, it came off unrealistically. Like real sex, slow and easy often works wonders. The author needed to build slowly to where it was they were going. It certainly had potential at first. Back to the drawing board. I look forward to their next attempt.

Especially if the son is also loving towards his mom while making her submit to his wishes.

I hope to see more of this storyline soon.

Thanks for the start.

You started it, now finish it!

IT'S TOO SHORT TO BE A STORY, SO I'LL CALL IT A TEASE. WILL THERE BE A PART 2, IT WOULD BE NICE. DON'T MAKE HIM OUT TO BE A REAL PRICK AND HURT HER.SHE CAN BE HIS SLAVE AND STILL BE LOVING.. LAROC OF AGES

Dom/sub sucks! Just my opinion. I can't stand them.

Has potential