All Comments on 'Tammy's Wolf and Mate'

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AhzureDragonAhzureDragonover 11 years ago
Hmm

I not sure you ever made it back to the present time. You state that Tammy was glad she was brought to the night club 8 months ago and then gave us the start to the detail about how this game started on the dance floor by going in to a flash back but you never came out of the flash back. So outside of being a little confused on weather we are still in a flash back or if you jump back to present time, I think you have a good start to a story. Hoping your next chapter will clear up this time confusion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Interesting start

Will wait to see how this story progress

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Love it

Can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
loved it.

i am really excited about this story. it has so much potential.

mmmac25mmmac25about 11 years ago
Nice!

Oh! Very nice. Please don't end it there. I so want to see what will happen next. Keep up the great work. This is the first of your stories I have read and now I can't wait to read more... ummm which one.. which... ah that one... Thanks so much for having the courage to post your stories for us to read. :D

Butterflies1974Butterflies1974about 11 years ago
Mmmmmmm, oh yes

Mmmmmmmm, oh yes this is a wonderful start to a very hot mate as they start their journey. Looking forward to more soon.

sexy_bosoxgirlsexy_bosoxgirlabout 11 years agoAuthor
thank you

I want to thank all of you that has taken the time to make a comment. I appreciate everyone. I just hope I don't disappoint any of you. I am currently working on the second chapter. So look for it soon....

AmatenAmatenabout 11 years ago
Omg!!!!!

Great start, no amazing start, that I didn't realize that it's not the hole story I'm getting now I have to wait for the next chapter. It's ok, I'll have you as my fav so I won't forget! XD

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Oh Brother

What a jerk. What did he expect her to do when he was so rude when she tried to introduce herself?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Another unfinished story, only read if you like disappointment

Damn it

VorstenVorstenover 5 years ago
Rushed

It feels very rushed. And she adjusts so quickly it's freaky.

Naming songs relates it to our world, but unless there's substantial differences, that you didn't tell us about, the vast majority of people would not react to the werewolf heritage and vampire mate thing that way.

She's less moved about not being human than I've seen some people react to finding out their great grand father was from country C instead of country A before they came to america.

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