All Comments on 'Three Steps'

Thanks for writing. 4*

It was fun. My only problem is with the two cheating wives...fine to help out a friend in need, but doesn't there husbands deserve a bit more then sloppy seconds.

and with very little actual story.

A decent quick read. Unrealistic, however.

Short but enjoyable. It could also have had more depth. The female characters could have been a bit deeper and more involved. That is to say that it's a good story with much more potential than was used.

Good read thanks for sharing.

Would have been a lot better if Tanya and Lisa hadn't turned out to be cheating skanks laughing about their husbands. Sasha's a group counselor for people who have gone through painful divorces yet she condones what they all did? They're well on their way to joining in her REAL counseling sessions the way they're going. Listen, I get it's an "erotic" fantasy about a sad sack who gets to nail three women he's lusted after for years but there should be some element of realism.

"They giggled like a couple of schoolgirls, whispering that they had to make sure their hubbies got some tonight." Yuck. Far more stomach turning than sexy. I gave no score since this simply isn't my kind of fiction. It's a shame, I was right there with the MC in the beginning.

Cute -- 5*

Lisa and Tanya are married. Sasha not sure from the story. So, Eddie goes from one broken marriage to possible helping trash three more marriages. Not a likeable character among them.