Bag Lady & the Retired Marine Ch. 01

that is so sad the way people treat each other

but i hope to read more of your story soon. I hope she has a better life comming ahead of her.

Outstanding Start

As usual, you have started out in a fantastic way. Keep it up.

I can only say WOW!
This is Dave, yes that one. lol

WOW

What a way to start my day! Another story from a fantastic writer!

To Short

Great start but not enough there.

Damn!

I know this is going to a tough read about a tough lady written by a tough lady author, but I can't resist your stories. Take care of this damsel in distress. The first chapter scores a 5. This is a great start to a romance novel.

A well written story

and for that deserves my 5 star vote but the subject is distressing.
Erotic in a way but much too close to reality to be enjoyable.

wow...

What a way to start a story.

Great timing

Good beginning, excellent character development. Now I'm hooked and need to read the next chapter. You know just when to pause. So many unanswered questions.

Very powerful Susan, I'm hooked!

First one of your stories I've ever read...

One hell of a start, even though it's not my first choice of materials to write about... I will be interested in seeing how you develope this story... Had to give it 5 stars...

Thanks***

For the read.

Written in the first person It makes for a good but uncomfortable read. One instantly identifies with the plight of the bag lady and makes it almost a nesessity to read the next chapter. thank you.