Beauty and the Geek Ch. 29

I love this series if you don't write more for it later it is very good. You are a good writer.

The most disappointing one ive read of yours. For this to be. Kind of an ending, we waited a long time for two and a quarter pages and two paragraphs worth of sex..not a good one. But 1 bad chapter out of 29 is a damn good ratio.

Jonathan

I actually don't think this is an ending. There's too much new material introduced. If it is, however, it's a bad chapter. Otherwise, it's an interesting one. Not the best, but not bad either.

Great series, but I feel that you're milking (no pun intended) sex between Charlie and Miley TOO MUCH!!

We've had to read about those two doing it for the entire series. As soon as it got into the 20s, sex between Charlie and Miley became mundane and boring.

I REALLY, REALLY want you to write more sex with Stacy. Chapter 9 was HOT!! I'm seriously getting tired of Stacy only being involved in kisses and other boring stuff.

thanks

glad to see a new chapter hope to see a few more soon kinda left us high and dry in this chapter but definitly gave us reson to look forward to the next one

I think it ended and wrapped up the Charlie-Miley stories. HOWEVER, I think we could see a Stacy-Brian series come from this. I enjoyed this chapter more than chapter 27 but not as much as other but that often happens in the final chapter. You know what to expect in it so it either meets expectations or fails to deliver. I say it met my expectations. Good luck on the future series whether it is Brian-Stacy, the Savannah story or anything else.

Made my day!

I really do hope that Charlie and Miley are pregnant! Screw Victoria, Charlie's going to be wonderful.

Thanks for the upload and can't wait for the next one.

Good ending

This seems like a good ending to me. Miley are Charlie are married and going to have a child. Brian and Charlie's comic book series looks like it is going to be a success. Brian and Stacy are happy together. The lawsuit with Samantha is settled. And just MAYBE Miley's mother thinks there is a chance for them because Charlie will be making money (as that is HER definition of happy). Charlie & Miley will make great parents.

Can't end

The story is too amazing and as wonderfully written as it is just can't end here!!

Great move

Love the tweaks to the story line... can't wait to see what happens with Haley and Jack.... Brian and Stacey...... AND Victoria!!! she has to have some drama on the way!!

more please this a wonderful story

great

Plez continue.

another great chapter

wonderful i really like this i hope there will be more on the way

Spin-Off?

I love this series and, althought you've said that this is the last chapter, I hope you decide to add to this story. It would be cool if you did a one-shot story featuring Stacy.

Hope to see at least another few chapters someday - after all of the buildup to Miley getting pregnant it would feel like a letdown to end the story without any actual pregnant sex between Charlie & Miley.

epilogue?

I think you are almost done! All you need is an epilogue,in which you would detail exactly how successful the comic book---and their fortunes turn out to be.

I would like to see a major motion picture studio do a Capt Darkness movie, with the royalties making Charlie and Milie multi-millionaires many times over, dwarfing the fortune that her mother, Victoria has, finally giving the old bat her comuppence!

Find a place for Stacy and, just for the fun of it, perhaps Victoria etting put in her place could be the last scene.

amazing!!!!!

Please continue I check nearly every day if u added another chapter I love this story!!!!

Good stuff

I see from your bio this may be the last. Shame but can understand the effort involved. It would be nice to see a little bit more. Some thoughts:-

What happened on release of comic? Movie deals?
Will Sam find true love?
Will Brian and Stacey make it work?
What happens when Victoria realises her son-in-law is rich (assuming comic success) and when bubs arrives? And what will Miley's reaction be?
Will Haley become stepmom?

Perhaps an epilogue 10 years after with reflections on the decade.

But what happened to the heart locket. Thought it might have been found in Brock's possession but it just seemed to never get mentioned again :-)

Great read.

entertained

I really hope you do alot more with this story, i know how much of a b**ch it must be to write these stories but i think they are really good, honestly you dont find this good of a storyline on this site and i love there characters, you have some talent and i hope you will continue, not just with a single epilogue but maybe change the title a bit to fit the married status of charlie and miley and get into the rest of their lives, and maybe you can do a few flashback. Stories and maybe a story on what happened the year charlie and miley were broken up, and a story for all of the times the setting liek skipped a week or two and fill in some blanks.....just brain storming but this isnt the kind of story that should just end ya know?

How'd I miss it

Somehow I missed this installment up to now. It is just as enjoyable as all the previous chapters. Mostly I like the humanity you inject into your characters. They have flaws just like real people. Still think that this should have been under Romance.

Haley?

what happened with Haley did her and Miley make up if so how could they forgive her for that scheme against Brian also I would have liked to have read more and Jack putting Victoria n her place.

next

Dude you must finish this. Let us know what happened to Brian and and the rest test of them

Amazing story

I started this story as a typical litterotica piece but having read all you have written in the last three days I have to say you are an amazing writer! You wove the story and the sex in to an amazing and enthrall ing story, I could not decide what I liked the most the character development or the sex. WOW, amazing job!

I finally finished it!

I ran across this story, and I've been reading it piece by piece. This is a great story! I didn't just get involve in the sex, but the characters were developed and central to the story. You should really consider publishing your stories even if it is just a hobby.

awesome story line

I have read this entire series from start to finish and will get to Charlie & Miley in a minute. Really enjoyed all 29 chapters and could not stop until I was finished. Looking forward to what you do next!

Great series

Keep on writing! Great work!

Finish this

Let me know how the comic turned out. Did Stacy and Brian get married what did you name your kid. Don't leave it hanging

WHAT

where and when did this moron finally learn to cook,,, last I seen she couldn`t nuke popcorn,,,is she going to breast feed this kid the rest of its life

Amazing

Read start to finish in 3 days, I became addicted to the story! Much respect for your time, talent and creativity. You should set up some kind of donation link or kick starter because I just feel like I robbed you reading this for free. Very entertaining great read!

I love the story but...

Really enjoyed the story, all the drama and conflict...even the hint of comedy. I am glad in the last few chapters the sex changed. Too redundant after a while and i would just hurry through the sex scenes. Gosh I believe I am as horny as Miley but that was awfully too boring after a while. I still believe men prefer being inside than hand jobs but then...to each his own i guess. Anyway, loved the story....congrats!

Awesome story

Read the whole story start to finish in a day.

It was...

Simply wonderful.
If you decide to continue you will definitely have a following.
Thank you for your time and efforts with this piece.
Warm regards, Mack

Very good with two caveats

Sam and Hayley's endings. Everything else in the story worked. But them giving Sam anything to do with their comic book is crap considering she's a known liar. Haley was not only in cahoots with Sam coming up with and working the pregnancy lie, but the Dad still dating her after she had a fist fight with his daughter? Um, no. Different kind of story and I commend you for sticking with it during hard personal issues.

AWESOME series!

I have already commented on the incredible sexuality of this...looking forward to now reading about Charlie & Miley!

Awesome!

I have just finished reading all your Charlie and Miley stories. They are awesome! You can really write extremely well. I can hardly wait for more.

Brilliant series !

A really great story over all 29 chapters. I very really enjoyed reading it, the only disappointment being that I've now read them all.
You're a great author, you must write more, a lot more !
Thanks again for a great story.

All

I'm sorry I waited to leave this. The comments would have been the same. "FRIGGIN GREAT" . Thanks

I cheated!

I've only read the first 6 but I had to make sure they stayed together before getting more into this series.
Love it tho!

I know it was just a joke but the average Indian first time mother is 28 now!

Fantastic series

Well done! A fantastic series! Kept me engrossed throughout the 29 chapters and then wanting more...

The Ending

I loved this whole series! It's a masterpiece that has sex, laughs, drama, and dirty deeds and thoughts all wrapped up in love. You totally clinched it for me with that last line though it was hilarious: "She sucked some more shake through her straw and considered what she and Charlie would be like fifty years from then, "Um, Charlie? You don't think your dick will shrink, do you?""

So much fun!

A ton of great lines, hot sex and fun characters. Much like Captain Darkness, Beauty is one of those rare blends that doesn't take itself seriously yet is able to deliver a solid character driven story amongst the silliness and smut.
Thanks for the fun,
Jason

Amazing story! I read it in one sitting, I couldn't help myself.

YESS

Had to pace myself after the first 10 stories, wanted to make this last because it's a great tale. I love it love it love it. The drama was just like "OH COME ON, REALLY? THINGS WERE JUST GOING GOOD!!!" lol I'm still freaking out about it.

Their are more it called charlie and miley, 6 more chapters in fact

From Chapter 1 to the final line of chapter 29 .....

Fantastic story... Thank you.
Is it too much to ask for more ....
A well crafted piece of work, sexy, funny, drama and a great circle of characters.

Thank you
Kezzo

Amazing

I started out reading this as something to jerk off to, next thing I know I am skipping over the sex parts to read the story and plot, very well written and engrossing, please keep the story going or at least give a closure on it, is Miley Pregnant ? does the comic take or or fall flat ? what becomes of Stacy and Brian ? do Haley and Jack get serious ? so many questions ? please finish this wonderful story