As Usual your description of what some people feel with PTSD is right on the money. I can't wait for more of this story.
You are correct on so many different levels, it is as though you are reading my mind.
The Marine having given so much and everything on PSTD is real for so many POW's
and is sure the right man at the right place to save her .
This is going to be good. Your previous commentators have it right on all counts. This could still make a great novel.
You description s very good. So many combat veterans feel just that way. Just wish the chapters were a little longer. Looking forward to more....Thanks
Yes I am surprised, this is not usually a genre I read, but the description in this chapter makes me VERY interested to read more. An intelligent read so far, I look forward to more.............excellent! Five stars from me!
Different and far better written than the usual work seen here.
The story line is still somewhat distressing to me but the writing is 5 Star and I am eager to see the next chapter.
Fantastic installment, looking forward to the next chapter.
This story so far is moving and disturbing. You have started a great story and I can't wait to see how this develops.
A regular conveyor belt of great stories, lady! Thank you!
This story creeps me the hell out, it really does.
That being said I have to also say I am enjoying
it please continue :)
I'm a veteran. I know this guy. They're around by the thousands. They all have these issues, and you have captured this very well. Thank you. Hopefully some people will have an appreciation of what the real casualties of war are.
Need I say more ?
I've been that man, spent 13.5 years in myself, before I got hurt... Reason I live way out in the country myself, and a reason for doing what I do... I'm a truck driver, if I don't want to hear anybody, I just shut off the radio's and go... Don't have to listen to anybody else ranting and raving about what a shitty deal they got... You, Dear Lady, have captured this quite well...
Thanks for the read.
wow! chapter 2 was completely unexpected. the reality depicted is almost scary, presuably as intended. my compliments and thanks for a rivetting read.
Now I see why Chapters 01 and 02 are separate. They are so different they had to be stand alone and not combined. 03 should be interesting.
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