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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/01/12

incredibly teasing and seductive

The pacing and rhythm of the prose is so languorously seductive and alluring, so maddeningly slow and yet so compellingly irresistible, ineluctable like the tide lapping at your toes that will finally, inevitably envelop and overwhelm you.

Outstanding.

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by Anonymous12/02/12

Highly erotic

Quite speechless really, and that is a good sign. The writer had me captured and I did not want the story to end. Highly erotic.

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by baron earth02/05/13

high;y charged

a very enjoyable read well written with a rhythmic feel to it - the erotic element was arousing but well contained - i look forward to further contributions
kind regards

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by ChasesDreams02/08/13

Captivating

The scene you created was vivid. Smooth, flowing, and very sensual. Thank you

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