This story has a great concept and I love that you showed us a bit of their past. Just edit the story a bit more. Keep on writing :)
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Anonymous12/03/12
Wrong Category?
Soooo apparently they're step-siblings? You should have made that clearer. There were a lot of vague areas. But I like the idea of the story. Just make things more obvious next chapter!
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Anonymous12/03/12
Great story. It was kinda confusing at first but its different
English
Interesting start
Promising.
Great concept
This story has a great concept and I love that you showed us a bit of their past. Just edit the story a bit more. Keep on writing :)
Wrong Category?
Soooo apparently they're step-siblings? You should have made that clearer. There were a lot of vague areas. But I like the idea of the story. Just make things more obvious next chapter!
Great story. It was kinda confusing at first but its different
good concept.. sorta
its a little confusing it could be clearer and it seems rushed. those together can kind of be a turn off?
Is this supposed to be incest or what that isn't clear here
Beautiful....
Please continue.
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