All Comments on 'Hazy Night with Taylor Swift Ch. 08'

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saidinbalefiresaidinbalefireover 11 years ago

please dont make us wait so long for the next chapter

TheBigLove126TheBigLove126over 11 years agoAuthor
Response to saidinbalefire

I don't plan to this time. The reason this took so long is that I had it close to finished a few months ago and lost it when my hard drive died. It took a few re-writes to get it to where I was finally happy with it. Originally this was supposed to feature Taylor & Dan but during the re-writes I decided to change it to Taylor & Carly with Dan coming back in Part 9

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Ghastly Writing!

This is the third "sentence": Their last "encounter" had occurred backstage before a concert where Taylor and Carrie Underwood, who was involved in the last "encounter".

If you read past that, you're a fool.

TheBigLove126TheBigLove126over 11 years agoAuthor
I forgot the word "also"...

Don't call the readers "fools" because I forgot one word.

I welcome constructive criticism but calling people "fools" for reading and saying the writing is "ghastly" after reading one paragraph is not constructive. I never claimed, nor will I ever, to be a professional writer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
nice

Cant wait for the next one! Soon hopefully!

TheBigLove126TheBigLove126about 11 years agoAuthor
Update

Chapter 9 has been submitted and will be up in a few days (it is 03/14/2013 as I type this)

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