Yes, Dear Ch. 01

Well , she does have one Hell of a secret....

Looking forward to see how it ends up. Very romantic so far and so well written.

Great story

Great story, was disappointed it was a multipart. But understand. Keep it up your writing is improving to the standard of startstang. Thanks for sharing ur talents. The bogeyman

Dammit

You did it once again and left me hanging there....

Can't wait until the next installment.

I enjoy your stories - keep up the good work!

HIGH ALTITUDE JOBS AND PRESSURES

add homemade lemonade, homecooking and you have a lethal combination. TK U MLJ LV NV

Like the story, but...

I like the story, but given how successful she is, wouldn't she already have the gender re-assignment surgery by now?

Interesting start

Really looking forward to seeing what happens next with these two. It's a bit jarring how you keep switching from first person to third person, if you stuck with a consistent perspective it would be an even better read.

Very Interesting

and well written. She seems do everything except for a certain small intimate detail.
I'll second the question as to why she has not had the appendage removed? But that does not reflect negatively on the quality of the story!

Yeah, this should have been labeled tranny.

You write so well. I'm not judging here but for me the word Transgender makes my skin crawl.

wish it was me

Have lived 8 years as a woman. Very good story. Keep up the good work.

WHEN ITS FUN FOR THE AUTHOR

the story has to be as well for the readers. TK U MLJ LV NV

Dear Tazz

I have read hundreds of your short little comments and honestly, at least half the time I have no idea what your point is.

Hard to understand the high ratings...

Title to comment says it all.

point of view?

why does it keep changing from first to third person in mid sentence

POV changes are very distracting

Loving everything except the constant POV changes. Makes me have to stop and re-read the sentence/paragraph to figure out what you're saying and it throws me out of the story.

I'll never know...

...how it ends, because I finally gave up. This recklessly switching POV is just too much. I found I too frequently had to re-read something to figure out what was actually happening. Now I see I'm not the only reader who was bothered by it. Maybe the author thinks it is cute to switch POV in a two-sentence paragraph. I don't.

His other stories are mostly well written, with interesting story lines, but just about every one of them suffers from the lack of even the most basic editing. We'll never know if it is caused by ego or ignorance, but it definitely lessens the quality of his final products. A story published here was not written over night. It often takes the author days or weeks to finish. After such a serious commitment, he owes it to the possible hundreds (sometimes thousands) of readers to publish it in a finished format. When it has frequent typos, wrong words and, in this case, wanton flipping of POV, it is an insult to his readers.

what pov changes?

im writing this as ive just read this chapter and then the top two comments i fail to see any pov changes it is all from a first person pov from the same charecter

To the previous anon, you're an idiot, the POV changes mid sentence all the time, this writer does not know how to keep to one pov.

Yes the PoV shifting is distracting

But the story is still good and promises to be fun - so i am going along for the ride -

i confess

I confess i am homophobic; it is definitely against nature, that i am sure. but, this story, it is just too good; other than the sentences that talk about the main protagonist's dilemma, it just does not feel like what is going on here is about a transexual romantic overtures. good story....or good part 1. I don't know.

great, except...

This is a phenomenal beginning! It has all the making s of a harlequin romance (just joking). Yes, it is exactly the romantic thing I was looking for.

Now regaining my masculinity... Could use a little editing (like at the art exhibit where Brian is referred to as Dave). Punctuation is always a plus for readers of romance.

Otherwise, a story we all wish would happen to one of us (or has, but we caught her cheating LOL)

so good

The story has started out so good.

Ron. Texas

Dave

They called Brian Dave at one time

YOU WARNED EVERYONE

You warned everyone at the sart of the story if this is not your cup of tea to pass on the story. After reading 2 or 3 lines I was hooked. It is funny loving has intruge. Anyone that cannot read this story and enjoy it and see the ups and downs and the struggle that Andi has should be reading comic books.This is not my first time to read it or my last. It is in my favorites.I will admit at first when I read it was about a transgender person I had negative thoughs but I think it is one of the best stories I have read.

Ron Texas
cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

great story

great story in my favorites. Don't know how many times to have read it.

Ron. Texas
cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

interesting tension build

it will be interesting to see how you fit this in Romance once the big reveal has happened.

LIKE YOU SAID AT FIRST

This is the first transgender story that I have ever read and I have to say that it has held my attention all the way thru. I guess the old saying Love is where you find it and Who you find it with is so very true. I have read it before and it is in my favrites. It makes me think back a couple years ago about a fire fighter that losthis life fiting a huge fire(he was divorced and had two children by his first wife) any way somwhow the wife did some digging and finally found that his wife was transgender and the mud slinging started. The gist of it all was she wanted the insurance money than changed it t she wanted it for the children it was all over the news on T.V. and in the papers. She was a very lovely woman. I dont know what ever came of it because all of a sudden it just died down.I know this has nothing to do with this story but he was aware that she was transgender before they married. Like I said earlier LOVE is where you find it and WHO you find it with.
Ron Texas
cowboyridecc@yahoo.com