by Ladytiger199
absolutely awesome, so far this is one of my favorite stories,and i really love how things are developing between zoe and Azriel .... update soon please cant wait for more
If you need an editor to continue, let me know. So far the story is great; good character development, subtle hints at the backstory and future plot, and realistic relationship development. I like it all.
Well,over 6 months since this chapter,,,is this just another unfinished posting???/DONT start something you cant finish,,,waste of readers time..
please please please please please please please please please write another one
This is bitter sweet, I enjoyed the story, but it's incomplete. Based on the comments you have no plans to finish. This is too bad, it had the bones of a great read.
As usual a writer starts a good story and then shoves their readers under the bus by not finishing the story. I am so sick and tired of unfinished stories on this site I could scream. I gave the 1st chapter 5-STARS but only 1-STAR for the 2nd chapter as it is an unfinished Why 85-90% 0f the writers on this site even start stories if they plan on not finishing them is beyond me. Retired Army NCO