All Comments on 'Zoe Ch. 02'

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Maree9999Maree9999over 11 years ago

Love this story thank u for this chapter hope the next one is soon

kitty5670kitty5670over 11 years ago
Thank you!!!

I was so glad to see this Chapter posted. Please continue!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
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absolutely awesome, so far this is one of my favorite stories,and i really love how things are developing between zoe and Azriel .... update soon please cant wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Are u going to continue this story

vivavixenvivavixenabout 11 years ago

If you need an editor to continue, let me know. So far the story is great; good character development, subtle hints at the backstory and future plot, and realistic relationship development. I like it all.

countrygirlflacountrygirlflaalmost 11 years ago
ENDING????

Well,over 6 months since this chapter,,,is this just another unfinished posting???/DONT start something you cant finish,,,waste of readers time..

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

please please please please please please please please please write another one

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Unfinished

This is bitter sweet, I enjoyed the story, but it's incomplete. Based on the comments you have no plans to finish. This is too bad, it had the bones of a great read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

these stories are awesome! Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
What a waste!!!

As usual a writer starts a good story and then shoves their readers under the bus by not finishing the story. I am so sick and tired of unfinished stories on this site I could scream. I gave the 1st chapter 5-STARS but only 1-STAR for the 2nd chapter as it is an unfinished Why 85-90% 0f the writers on this site even start stories if they plan on not finishing them is beyond me. Retired Army NCO

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
.Sex

You need to finish this story. I can wait for the sex part

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