Two Weeks of Love Ch. 02

Great

Don't stop now, i liked the fact that it wasn't just bang on. But a very nice build up..

Promising Story Spirals to Generic Stroke Status

This started out well in first part- the son had a girlfriend & wasn't a callow virgin. This was reflected in the courting phase where the two went out to the mall and had some teasing dialogue. Tension and rapport was established. The pizza and choice of sensual indie film set the stage very nicely.

The action & story was broken off with mom just beginning to explore the taboo zone. The story picked up again with standard hesitation, standard token resistance and devolved into mere stroke status. All attention for ubique detail was shut down. You can hit the tag for mom-son story and cut and paste what transpired here.

All worldly savoir faire evaporated from the story. It seems the first time author ran out of ideas. Perhaps next time with first story under his belt , the mechanics of writing a story will consume less energy and he can concentrate on writing a " special story " from start to finish". I wish him luck.

his mother thinks that incest is so wrong.. how about if they only have oral and anal sex ? (not vaginal intercourse). It would be very, very exciting....

In two weeks he could have her pregnant.

I hope that he gets to stretch her little pussy out with his big cock in the next chapter.

Thanks for the read.

the neighbor Ted

best story.........

When a son is this much in love its
a primal territorial thing.

Ted starts sniffing where he doesn't belong.
God have mercy on his soul...

Similiar experience

My Mom became very depressed when my Dad left us and began drinking too much wine each night. One night she came back down stairs in a sexy nighty and asked me if she still looked good for a 45 year old woman. One thing led to another and I was soon making my mother moan as I licked her sweet blond pussy. This led to years of great sex. Turns out Mom really enjoyed anal sex too!

Reading Your Comments

Thanks for the feedback. LordSlamDawgg, I completely agree. I actually wanted to prolong the contact even more, but had no idea who I was writing for. I didn't know if prolonging physical contact any longer would have driven users mad. I agree with your thoughts on the generic take on what transpired between them. Sadly I have no idea on how to avoid such a thing. Did I perhaps lose detail in the midst of the erotic sections?

Cheers

Superb story telling

Hi and welcome to this site. I love the way you told this story in the beginning but you seemed to have gone into the intercourse too quickly.

I love the way you described the mom and set the scent but for your next story, let the physical contact between mom and son take slow steps. Accidental cum shots.... See through clothes worn innocently... just a few ideas.

I write similar themed stories to you... have a look.

This is a great two-part series, and I...

love the comment from maternally obsessed: "When a son is this much in love its a primal territorial thing. Ted starts sniffing where he doesn't belong. God have mercy on his soul..." That is so true. Once a boy has fucked his mother--once he's gotten his big hard cock up his mother's mommy-hole, the same wonderful hole he came out of and blown his young balls up his own mother's cunt--he's marked that particular cunt as his own. He just won't stand for any other guy to get up between his mother's legs, the only semen allowed up what is, after all, his own birth canal is his own semen, from his own hot young balls. And that's that, period.

More please

When oh when

You wrote these 2 parts back in 2012 and even though readers were clamouring for another part, you have disappointed us all with your inability to complete the story. Not happy Jan!!