Keeping it in the Family

A little short, but a good start.

I'll be watching for more

yeah this ended abruptly

But iwas really liking it but and want to see the next chapter soon. So please continue and please make the next installment a little longer and don't end it just as you get the good part.

too short

Good start, just far too short.

Please make continuing chapters longer.... thanks in advance.

LOVED the story and all the possibilities o hot women, BUT I HATE IT WHEN ALL YOU GET IS A TEASER AND LEFT HANGING

I'll say it.

Too fucking short , would have been a good intro to a story but the teasing shit pisses people off!

Good Teaser

I agree with everyone. Its a good plot and teaser but now make sure you continue and submit a good complete chapter. Lots of potential i can see