All Comments on 'The Gift'

When you write in large blocks of narrative its kind of hard on the eyes. The story was good but... You might want to work on a better balance between the dialog and the narrative to help break that up a bit more. A lot of the things you were 'saying' you could have had your characters 'tell'.

Also try to keep narrative and dialog separate with a space between them. Also helps the eyes. The second to the last paragraph has that problem.

Like I said good story as far as the story part went.

M.S.Tarot

That was a twist. Enjoyable.

Still confused how we arrived at the end.