You have to write the second chapter to this as soon as you can!!!!
Outstanding beginning ... don't stop now!
You've got me! Hook, Line AND sinker! You must continue. I couldn't tear my eyes away from reading that. VERY well put together. Awesome plot and something to keep me and everyone else on the edge of their seats!
Really hope you continue!
I've read this like 4 or 6 times already, really hope you can continue !!! It'd be very hot and exciting
You really need to write more of this! By the way, huge castle fan so Stana Katic being first really is awesome, I agree, I'd go gay for her. But really, this needs a second part, it's too good
Seriously, I've had you on my favorites list for what seems like forever, and I frequently check back to see if there's anything new from your keyboard. I love the tone of your stories (although I often wish you'd let us peek at the denouement and not just the deeply emotional run-up - is it too private?)
Please. Write more.
Now I really want to see Chapter 02. Please. They both want it now and they both realize it.
I think a second story would be so hot. I would love to read it, but its not necessary. It's really a perfect end. And such a turn on. But if you ever feel inclined to pen part 2, I'll read in a heartbeat.
yes please. i love your writing. the characters are so real. i'd like to see what these two do, now that their little secret is out in the open.
C'mon we've all waited long enough. You can't just start something and leave. Please continue :(
This had the possibility of something good but the Author chose to screw it up by not even a teaser. No action, no interest.
Sometimes less is more, my imagination worked overtime after finishing this! Keep up the great work.
It takes astonishing skill to write as artfully as this. The apparent ease is deceptive. Every word and every paragraph has been carefully arranged and polished. The theme is thoughtful and thought-provoking. And in terms of technical craftsmanship, this one-page wonder is flawless! I am so glad that you ultimately decided to pick up the story line and develop it.
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