First Time With Sis

Very good!

I think it is a very good first story and set up. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Great story

Dont stop now, can't wait for the follow-up story with Mom !

Very Erotic

I enjoyed your story. True stories are really more enjoyable to read when you consider that it actually did happen.
Looking forward to more of your true encounters.
One note though - proof read for grammatical errors such as - my sister and me- should be my sister and I, also I think you intended to say wandering but typed wondering.
Otherwise an excellent story

Beautiful and caring sister!!

Great story and don't worry too much about the punctuation. Would love to have a sister like yours. Look forward to reading about your next time with her.

Anonymous

I find it interesting how much criticism is posted by anonymous. He must be a busy fella because I see his posts everywhere. That must be the reason he or she doesn't seem to have time to post stories to show the rest of us how it's done.
I do take seriously the comments by Dimmu_Borgir because this person has the balls to sign his post.
Merry Christmas. I look forward to more real soon.
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Punctuation is a minor issue

Very good story, held the attention throughout, to me the punctiation didn't matter. what mattered was that it was a good story well told .
I for one am luoking forward to further exploits.

Well done keep writing.

Apparently

Is it my imagination or is this website frequented by an inordinate amount of English teachers? They must be a bunch of horny fuckers.

A good start

I'd like to read about that skiing trip, and how he and his hot sister become lovers.

Thanks for the read.

Good story

Fuck the Grammarnazis lol. Keep writing.

Loved it! More please!

This was a great start !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I read this one first, now on to Mom. Hope it's as good as this one .You did a great job, Well written, but spelling could use some work. A good read.. . LAROC

You lucky s.o.b.

I'll refrain from anything crass here, but I wish my older sisters were like your one.
They were hot, but bitches to the core. Still are too.

great !

nice sis fucking....please write more about skii trip.
I love this sister fuck & I love it...but it is too ugly & guilty to fuck ur mom.
It will be ok if she is ur 'step' mom but 'mom' its ugly.
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But I'm counting on you for the 'skii trip'..so keep writing.
Good job ! ;)

Pure joy.

I don't know how you managed to hang on so long. I would have blown my brains out as soon as sis took me in her mouth.
Besides that I was overcome by your story as it gave the essence while refraining from the usual Lit. overgrown body bits and far to often gutter talk.

Great Job!

Nicely written, I don't mind spelling mistakes, I only mind poor and incoherent stories, but your story was really good. Somehow I found this website by mistake, and found the older sister category, After I've read 6 stories and was almost bored to death, I wasn't expecting to find something as good as this one. It really was different then the other stories but in a good way. I must say that I always loved older sisters with big breasts (not enormously big), I just like the way they are,their weird but nice way of loving you, though I haven't got a sister or a brother, I always wished for one, preferably an older sister. Personally I don't care who the person is as long as I love them, be it my sister or not, I don't know why siblings marriage is prohibited, as I said before why does it matter when you love them ?. Anyway, this is a really good story, great job! Cheers , Anonymous :D

I'm jealous!

If this is truly a real account, all I can say is "you lucky devil" =) As the others have said, ignore the English teachers and come sit with us ordinary folks. We'd love to hear more.

respect

Wow Great written story. Chapeau!

love it

was better than I expected as was the time that I first I slipped my rock hard cock into my younger sisters virgin pussy was heaven and we continued too fuck for 3 years before she would let me fuck some of her friends one of which I still fuck from time too time when her hubby is out of town