All Comments on 'Setting Moon Ch. 07'

I always thought that Gabriel was supposed to be the good guy but you make him sound evil surely he would not be allowed to just kill anyone he pleases! Will she be a wolf that can fly?

You REALLY need an editor. No kidding. I know you are doing this for fun. So do i. This is a good story, but this needs to be spaced out. All this explaining and deep information is getting lost in translation. Also, its not ark angel, its archangel. Pace it better, even if it takes you longer to post.

Keep up the good work!

i thought this story was about sam and lilliana and her trying to get her son back

I love the detailed info, A lil spell checking will get rid of the spelling errors. Personally, I don't care about typos, spelling errors, etc., I look for a story i like and read it. Althought those knit-pickers complain about this and that as far as I'm concern they can go buy a professionally published novel and read it and go to hell at the same time because I don't see them taking the time to post anything worth reading besides their complaints.

Looking forward to the next chapters.

i cant wait for you to write more. it was amazing!!!!

This is getting worse. I still like the idea of it, but you are all over the place without any kind of flow or logical development. It's kind of weird - and not in a good way.

And do some research! Arch (not ark) angel.

If u ever do a rewrite, please clear up how angels are super powerful, but cant seem to protect themselves from vampires.