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A Valediction:Forbidding Morning

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by Anonymous

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by SweetOblivion12/02/12

All hail the night and the silence

and the rhythmic canter of words that your verse comprises. M

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by demure10112/28/12

Love the pun -

It also fells a liitle like THe Sun Rising, in a different way. Very good!

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