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by MacD712/07/12

kind of odd but interesting none the less. But why would she need an alibi? what crime did she commit by being publicly raped?

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by H.H.Morant04/07/13

Could have been a *****

... but the loose ends are flapping the wind. She provided the tape to police, I guess
Had any rapes been reported? And in the US under federal law and that of most states her videotaping was a crime (surreptitious filming of sexual activity is very, very frowned upon) for which she'd need a alibi (that is, she would say "I wasn't there and I didn't make those tapes")

And the comment that "the three mystery girls from the end of the tape [were wearing] wigs" is incomprehensible.

I assume the narrator means herself on three different mornings. Okay. How were the videos made?

Given the seriousness of the loose ends I probably should have given this *** On the other hand, the ingenuity and original nature of the plot should have gotten it six or seven (original plots are in very short supply around here)

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