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Cloned Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/06/12

?

?HUH?
Was there a subtlety I missed? Was this all from the robot's perspective or did they shift. Who was the guy and why did the other her show up at the end?

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by Jace_B12/06/12

Awesome

I absolutely loved your story, it shows the delicacy needed and also the complicacy of cloning, while also still being erotic. Awesome.

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by billyjim5512/10/12

confused

DID THE WIFE DECIDE SHE WAS JEALOUS AND SHIP THE CLONE TO A STRANGER? dern caps lock. Anyway I didnt think there was enough info to the story line. unless I missed it but I think others are thinking same thing, I like the idea, just didnt come across in a 1 pg deal,

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by Anonymous08/25/14

Confused

I liked it, but it needed something more to make it clearer .

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