All Comments on 'Cloned Ch. 01'

?HUH?

Was there a subtlety I missed? Was this all from the robot's perspective or did they shift. Who was the guy and why did the other her show up at the end?

I absolutely loved your story, it shows the delicacy needed and also the complicacy of cloning, while also still being erotic. Awesome.

DID THE WIFE DECIDE SHE WAS JEALOUS AND SHIP THE CLONE TO A STRANGER? dern caps lock. Anyway I didnt think there was enough info to the story line. unless I missed it but I think others are thinking same thing, I like the idea, just didnt come across in a 1 pg deal,

I liked it, but it needed something more to make it clearer .