All Comments on 'Palomino Ch. 10'

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Sidney43 over 11 years ago

My only complaint is that the chapters are fairly short. About double this length would be better as more of the story could be read at one time. I guess if that is all I can find to complain about it is a good story.

Anonymousover 11 years ago

Geat Story BUT

Please don't make us wait so long beween chapters and I also agree with the previous comment,make the chapters longer !

Ravey19 2 months ago

Fantastically well written chapter

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I'm a 37 year old woman. I've been writing since I was big enough to hold a pencil. All kinds of works. Anywhere from fantasy and history, to modern, to the most erotic fantasy scene I get in my head. My writing comes from a delightful mix of personal experiences that are very...

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